The lyrics had a great story behind them and flowed nice with the
percussion and the rest of the music and the O'ahh's, that part I thought
was cool. The piano was the driving force in the music mostly and the
melody was perfect with the lead vocals and backgrounds. Nice production
and panning effects in the mix which had me very interested in what was coming
up next...Good job, Sean...
I like the Muslimgauze type percussion slipping in the background... has a
pretty powerful and arresting effect. Nice feel for sure. The vocals are
strong, and it's a lovely memorable melody over the music. Sweet. Mmmmm...
perfect chorus! The songwriting here is accomplished obviously. The drum
work is really nicely complimentary and nicely mixed... cuts thru and
drives it without sticking out. I like this singer more and more as the
song progresses! Very uplifting. You are a talented girl. Nice little
piano and percussion break - fits nicely and is not awkward as many breaks
can be - it revisits the ethnic feel that started the song off. Perfect
drop back into the chorus. Damn this is great! And I am no longer
afraid to be who I want to '-) *Excellent job* Really. Keep it coming.
Why am I not hearing this song on the radio?! The lyrics are
meaningful, the touch of eastern flavor really satisfied my inner
ethnomusicologist! The lead vocals are out of this world! That is a
voice that is used properly! There is so much emotion present in the song
lyrically, and it is brilliantly presented with the lead singer's voice. I
love everything about this song! SO well written, and produced.
- DFitzsimmons from Collingwood, Ontario, Canada on 12Sep2004
This song sounds like its very mainstream to me. Really like the lead
vocals, this girl has talent. lyrics are engaging, melody is very
pleasant. beat drums mix sounds good. This is as good as anything i
hear on radio play. hope to hear ya on there soon. - debbie
- ShotGunSister from Toronto, Ontario, Canada on 12Sep2004
I like the Indian music-like intro. Then the piano is very nice. The
lead singing is phenomenal, the drums sound slightly off. The melody
is excellent. I could totally see hearing this song on the radio
someday. Awesome job.
This is mainstream material. The vocalist actually sounds a bit
like Britney Spears, but the lyrics and song has much more depth than a
Britney Spears song.
The song sounds like a mix between Evanesesnce and Madonna's Ray Of Light,
featuring Tori Amos on piano. The vocals are very clear and the melody
flows very well. I really like this track and would say it sounds like
a hit to me.
- kingvirtue from Chesapeake, Virginia on 8Sep2004
I like the intro & the vocalist, who by the way has a strong
commercial voice. I think the concept is strong & I'm sure it as great
placement ability with TV/Film, definitely in the genre of pop.
the dynamics of the song were written & formatted very well, this is a
strong song with a lot of marketability. The production complimented the
song nicely, not too sure about the ARABIC TRIP sounds though... Goodluck
- LatinoSaint from Nashville, Tennessee on 8Sep2004
THIS SONG IS NICE. YOU HAVE A PRETTY VOICE. YOU HAVE STAR QUALITY. VERY
PRETTY VOICE I LIKE IT.IF I WAS A RECORD PRODUCER I WOULD SIGN YOU VERY
FAST. VERY TALENTED.
Starts in a tribal mood, something exotic is coming. Slowly builds in some
mysterious effects. The groove starts, and its heavy. With the back pads
its really deep, deeper than a usual pop song. Very moody, good
work with the atmosphere, the stereophony. The singer has this candy voice
that is easy in the ear.
Great Intro, reminds me of Thievery Corporation with the zaney voices over
a solid production line incorporating tons of instrumentation. Wow the
instrumental break into the body is pretty amazing. The voice is beautiful
and the lyrics are simple. This is my kind of music. Good music. Generally
not my thing, but WOW this is a solid track. I feel the pull of so
many genres and the track has some really amazing production. The hook is
beautiful and the stacking of the vocals is right on. I hear a record
contract...
- bradleyhiphop from Los Angeles, California on 6Sep2004
Whirling synth chords and distant chimes bring in an ethnic (middle
eastern) male vocal. It's further enhanced with percussive drums, a small
explosion, and some grand piano. Drum fill brings us into a steady rhythm
from laid back drum kit, warm bass, cowbell and deep sythn chords, and
piano. Sweetly, energetic female vocal sings about "not being afraid
to say what you feel, cause you're the one that makes it real".
Interesting verse and chorus lines and development. Good imagery
lyrically. Great feel rhythmically. Very fresh and original. Super
instrumentation and choices of sounds and production. Great vocals, lead
and harmonies. Put this one on the radio, please.
- DianeWayne from Alkmaar, North Holland, Netherlands on 6Sep2004
AWESOME INTRO- WOW, great mid eastern flow. The mood is set from
the start. Breaks down with a nice piano melody followed by heavy drums,
bass, and some scat singing by the female singer. The singing is well
performed, strong and on key... I really enjoyed the production, very good
arrangement. The chorus has a great melody, with a bit of layering and
light harmonies... Just when I wanted a bit more of the mid eastern vibe
back, they give you just a taste before the second verse. Good blend of
mood, very commercial sound and well placed in pop. I'm not afraid
to say what i feel like you say in the song, so feel good that I like it!!!
And you don't hear the piano nearly enough in music these days. I'm not
really a connoisseur of pop music but this is very impressive. If this
artist isn't on the radio soon I will have lost faith in all humanity.
Beautiful voice, beautiful song. Harmonies are on. Kudos to the sound
guy. If i was in the biz I'd sign you now. Get out of the garage... you
are attic material.
- REDDEMON1111 from Biloxi, Mississippi on 2Sep2004
Great intro. Nice blending of those odd intro elements into the meat of
the song. The vocals are superior to most of what I hear, even if they
sound a lot like Britney. (no offense intended) Beautiful chorus line. The
mix of the song is completely professional - I assume that it was done
professionally. Doesn't really leave any room for criticism, I
mean, you've done exactly what you set out for.
This song is Amazing! The Lead Vocals are Strong. The lyrics are
great as well. And the melody Is Great. sum it up to say that
it all fits into an amazing Musical Package that arrives as this song. The
Harmonies are very reminiscent of Wilson-Phillips. I like the production
of the piece. The strange Intro and the reprise of that intro towards the ending
of the song. this sounds like something Like a song that needs to be on
the radio. You kept me hanging on throughout the entire song. The
melody hangs in your head. And that's a great thing! Good Job!
- stevechapman from Stedman, North Carolina on 28Aug2004
Indian style intro - leading into a really charming voice! The lyrics
really work well - and gets the message across nicely!! This is a hit - you
got a really monster hit song on your hands!!
Real time review.. Intro - What the? aaa sound .. it's from another
country .. very interesting.. movie like.. get the guns... what's that!
Body - nice lift.. drum is hot. Lyrics - Whoa... nice sike technique.. she
can sing.. you've got something here ... "working for justice every
day, with all this corruption we need and injunction, it's true".. Big
up for these lyrics.. Nice Singer..she's beautiful. Hook - hot
"you're not afraid to be .. to say what your feel... leading the
way... your the one that makes it real.... (TO THE BOARDS WITH THIS..
ITS A HIT) Like it much.. Makes me want to talk like Yoda! You have
lots of talent.. keep the band, keep the girl, producer, writer and the
bird on the roof... Peace..
Visit www.godswater2003.com //// also this contest at www.oldschoolmeetsthenew.com ... peace..
Intro pulls the listener in... Vocal is exceptional. Nice lyrics... She is
very good... the production is solid. Once the tune starts, it is a
great tune with commercial potential. Very good sound!
- allegrojazz from Santa Clarita, California on 27Aug2004
nice tribal feel to the instrumentation; unique sounds--very
dramatic/good for movies; very different from when the vocal cuts in;
strong voice emotes the lyricals which have depth to them
- larajaninefrom Los Angeles, California on 26Aug2004
Chords play like a roaring engine, and then we get into some bollywood
stuff, with lotsa indian influence. But hey, this was just the intro. A
definitely original one. The same comment goes for the bridge around 3:50.
A great piano / guitar / bass / drums / singer pop comes in afterwards.
The production of this one is well made. There's hardly something to
complain about it. The lyrics work with me. They are about being oneself
and not hiding what one is deep inside. They may sound a bit clich・to
some wanna-be underground people, but they just deal about things that are
buried deep in the human soul, and therefore I have nothing to complain
about them. The "Be what you wanna be" theme is a classic one,
but it's still working, and will probably work for many centuries to come
(unless some dumbass hits the "Total nuclear Armageddon - do not
push" button) as being what one wants to be will probably be hard for
many many years. I'd say that we have a well crafted pop song here, that
for sure deserves airplay...and maybe even more... (got what I
mean, Mr. A&R ?)
- TNK from Village-Neuf, Alsace, France on 26Aug2004
This song immediately captures your attention with a very
atmospheric introduction. Nice percussion ideas and very good production. Lead
vocals and harmonies combine to create a very catchy chorus melody. Quite
nice to hear a pop tune with world music influences.
- DavidG23 from London, Uk, United Kingdom on 25Aug2004
Great lead vocals, clear and crisp, lyrics are vibrant and political,
the melody is sweet, and heart wrenching. Nice all around piece of
music, well orchestrated and filled with esteem. -Chris
- noisecontrolfrom Niagara Falls, New York on 24Aug2004
Uber groovy opening, loving the techno-meets-world feel, excellent
layering of tracks... Was expecting a dance track, was happily surprised
to hear the piano come in and strong female vocals with smart lyrics. Kind of
reminded me of early SBL - a great slow groove, sexy vocals, clear
message, excellent production values. As good as anything female
vocalists are putting on pop radio right now, and a damn sight better
than most. Easy on the ears, catchy hooks and interesting world music
backdrop - I think it could do well on pop and even some AC markets.
- staciahush from Los Angeles, California on 23Aug2004
Yeah!!! This is one for the records, or the playlist for that matter. The
mix on this song is pro level, she is fearless and flawless in delivery
and performance, must buy tickets for the live show/set.
Unusual Bangra intro and backing with an Eastern beat and flavor. I can't
imagine how the band can produce such a professional sound unless they
have some really pukka equipment. Lead vocal does not have a distinctive
voice but it's very commercial and she has lots of melody to play about
with. I like the tempo variety in the vocals and the hard/soft
reproduction. I imagine this is already a 5 star posting because it's hard
to fault. Lyrics are passionate and personal so it could become an 'our
song' classic.
- KITMAC from Leicestershire, United Kingdom on 23Aug2004
Great song. Vocal performance is killer. Very convincing. Lyrics
are nice. Very cool melody. Lead vocals make this song though. Good
production too. Percussion at the intro is very interesting.
- makerecords from Clarksville, Tennessee on 22Aug2004
The middle eastern sounding influence is a good attention grabber. The
lead vocals remind me of the bangles, not Suzanna Hoffs but one of the
other three; just can't remember her name. It is also similar to Kylie
Minogue in delivery. The melody is really great; it has a flow that
has focus in that runs from start to finish without ever going over the
top or going astray. The lyrics sound very personal and are well created
in a way that makes it easy for the listener to relate. Really loved the
instrumental sections. Got any more like this or an extended or dance mix maybe?
- Ara_Tipu from Cambridge, Waikato, New Zealand on 21Aug2004
